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Topic: “Students should be allowed to quit school and work to help support their family. Do you agree?”

 Poverty is a situation that we cannot change or __hard to change__ because of the area of poverty is become large and larger by day. There are many causes to the community about this situation.As an example, the rate of birth is higher at a certain country and economic crisis that occurs. __So it had cause many effect__ such as students need to quit school to help their family to overcome their situation.Should they quit school? In my opinion, I disagree with the statement as __education is one of the main point of life and there are many alternative that students can do rather than quit school. __

Firstly, education is the important reason of our life. __Without education our life become meaningless__. Actually,__money come from education__, so for poor people it is a must for them **to abroad** their study.With education, __they will have more brighter future__ and they can help their parents on that time.Then,__they not only support their family but can change their lives__.Besides, their life as teenagers __should be alive__ with friends and education and not by working.Although by working can support their family but it is temporary and with education it can become more secure and permanent in the future.

Secondly, __there are a lot of alternative__ for students to support their family rather than quit school. If they wanted to work,they can work in the weekends or after their schools.It is no good for them to just quit school as it can affect their future because of it is not their duty to find money but it is their parents duty.By going to school, they can also make money __by quest__ the teacher for work and their friends.In addition, schools give money for student that have problem with money so this is another alternative for them to help their family.On the other hand, If they quit school and help their family, __there is no much difference__ between they work by quitting school and work without quitting school so it is no use for them to quit school.

In conclusion,students should not be allowed to quit school and work to support their family as knowledge is a basic things to do to improve the situation of their family and besides quit school,there are many ways to help their family. So,there are no such things like simple ways to succeed in life, if they wanted to change their life, they need a long way as they live in a poverty and only they can change the situation.